Waisted

by Anthony   Jun 20, 2007


Darkness wraps around the white rose,
petals fall from the delicate flower.
Thorns prick the thin soft skin of a child.

Blood falls to the ground of blackness.
The child cries.

Light reveals a red rose,
a delicate flower, ready to wilt.
The girl in black sheds her blood to save the life of the rose.

Waisted blood, essential liquid
passed down through generations.
Devoured by some.

Waisted!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very original and interesting poem. It has really powerful atmosphere and imagery is superb. I like the topic you wrote this piece greatly it is very effective.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

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  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    The imagery in this was really good, definitely the best part of this poem. This was a beautiful read, and I very much enjoyed it. =)

  • 17 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    So raw and poewerful, doesnt need to rhym just exquisit the way it already is!..5/5 keep it up
    tops
    bree

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

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