Nice poem..liked it very much:D
keep upt he gr8 writing nver stop:D
bree tk care

Awesome, I loved it. keep writing it is wonderful to hear your new poems. it makes me want to learn more about you. 5/5 great work keep it ^

c#@++y

So raw and poewerful, doesnt need to rhym just exquisit the way it already is!..5/5 keep it up
tops
bree

The imagery in this was really good, definitely the best part of this poem. This was a beautiful read, and I very much enjoyed it. =)

ThiS poeM iS besT, sO whY i shoulD gO foR thE 2nD besT? lovelY writinGs..... besT oF lucK anD wheN timE permitS i wilL reaD yR otheR poemS.... thankS.

luzaN

Very original and interesting poem. It has really powerful atmosphere and imagery is superb. I like the topic you wrote this piece greatly it is very effective.
Well done! This poem truly deserves 5/5