This was a greatly written poem with too much emotions, keep it up

A beautiful poem. The words flow very smoothly and intertwine with eachother, and depicts a very sombre, hurtful story. Touched me deeply. 5/5.

Wow ur poem is REALLY similar to mine...
especially this part

I can think back to those simpler times
When I would run to you with a bleeding knee,
And you would fix it up and dry my eyes,
Then you would hug and comfort me.

Mine is a lil bit different but the knee part is the same! lol thats kinda weird but funny! Keep writing!

Oh, wow. That was a poem that I will not forget. Wow, that touched me so deeply. It was so good, oh my. You have a pure talent here, wow. Amazing, I can't believe it. You made me tingle and shiver at the end. At first I thought it was about a lover, but it was your mom that you wrote about. Such an amazing twist. I loved it, great job!!
5/5

Great poem very passionate and beautifully put together

laura

Awww =( This is really emotional. The first stanza really gets you.. and it just wants you to keep on reading it. Really nicely done. Thanks for you comment by the way =)
5/5
xxx

Wow,that was amazing.i can just feel the love & compassion you have for her.i can sorta relate,it does hurt to see a mother cry.
beautiful piece,you've got a lot of talent.

--lexie

Very sad and touching piece, I don't like it as much as the rest of yours, so I won't rate it.
Keep up!

Sad and easy for ppl to relate to the emotions.. wonderful job

I don't blame you for crying, not one bit.
I know you're sick of all the lies.
But for once, I wish you'd smile again,
And there'd be no teardrops falling from your eyes...

fave stanza ^^^^^^^^^^

Wow..this is a strong written poem. i love it. and to tell you the truth...i could even feel a tear coming up. keep it up 5/5

***ayshley***

Love this.
Had a huge amount of emotion.
One of the best ive ever read

♥Mz.Raven

Aww hunn thats a really sweet and adorable poem i hope you let your mom read it i think it would make a difference in her world...5/5 without a doubt <33