Comments : My big brother

  • 17 years ago

    by kookie

    I know how you feel my borther went to jail for something he didnt do he was my best friend now hes not here to keep me safe to tell me he loves me i am lost its okay they always love you just things get in the way

  • 17 years ago

    by Kristina

    Aww, this poem is really sad and it's filled with lots of emotion. I really like it a lot. The flow of it was great! You really have a way with words. Keep on writing! 5/5

    ~Kristina