This is really good, I like it

Manda x

This is probably the most descriptive poem i have ever read. I have not read a poem in this format either. It's new and different. I am saying this in a good way. The short sentences make the poem sound more like an urgent person who is telling about their life. It's cool! I also like the way you chose your words. They are ever so poetic! keep writing as you have done, and good job!

Different style but i like it very informative well done :)

I thought it was great u expressed what u where feeling and it was very strong very emotional.5/5 i loved it and u rock!!

Wow!! this poem was deep, i like how you write. its awesome. great job!!

You are a really great writer. your words pass in so well in the poems. I really liked it.

Another good poem keep the good work k..5/5

5/5 great poem, keep up the good work!

Again a very great poem with detail, i like detail