Comments : Another Day Gone

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Gee, I wonder who this could be about?
    I clap for you, because this wasn't for a contest.
    Greaaat poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    Very good i liked this poem
    _forever carly_

  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Another fine written piece, well done. You just need to change some words xD

    I think youre a wh*r3,
    ^^ it's you're

    And Im not missing you,
    ^^I'm

    All that ive done,
    ^^I've

    But anyway I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Riz

    Yes, that's it. Move on. Nicely written, the flow was great. 5/5