Aw, how lovely :)
well i hope things work out for you
good luck

Very good poem andrew, i know exactly how you feel man, flows good for a nonrhyme poem, i give this one a 5/5!! keep them coming

I think this poem is nice, i think its cute when guys write about there girl. my boyfriend wrote 3 or 4 poems about me, and never again has he tried to write me another, yet he writes about god knows what, well my point is hopefully you keep writing about your girl, cause out of experience it feels good to be written about.

That's really sweet.
Thank you for the comment on my poem.
Good work.
5/5