Comments : Lucky

  • 17 years ago

    by Richard Machado

    It's not bad at all, I always have trouble reading poems that don't rhyme; but I realize it doesn't take away from meaning. It's deep and - nice - so keep it up, you will learn from experiance.

    Nice write.

    ~Richi~

  • 17 years ago

    by bacha

    I loved it :)

    keep it up:))

    khuloodan:)
    smile all the time:)