Lost happiness

by Phil   Jun 21, 2007


When I was with Ngaire,
My happiness had no bound,
since she has been gone,
My happiness cannot be found.

Her presence would brighten up a room,
Her beautiful sensitive wee smile,
would make my heart go boom.

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  • 17 years ago

    by sheila

    Love it 5/5

    * $heila *

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I love the ending you used here..beautiful and moving.
    I found this to be touching and heartbreaking at the same time, and beautifully written.
    You managed to put a lot of emtoion into a relatively short piece...well done.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hebe

    Touching, sweet, yet sad poem.
    Great piece of writing.
    Take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Great poem well written and sweet , full of love and happy thoughts , well done, like it ,,,,your friend Tracy d

  • 17 years ago

    by SweetElectric

    This is so beautiful!...so sweet but sad..i love it..
    ~maria

    ps: thanks for commenting!

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