Never will she know

by my name is Llama   Jun 21, 2007


I was lower than the low
Lost and incomplete

My hope had vanished
My childhood was all lost

I was treading on thin ice
About to shatter and suck me in

Deeper and deeper i would fall
Until all would be lost, no return

But just when i was about to give up
She came and saved my life

I knew that i was now safe
And nothing could hurt me anymore

But then she had to go
I felt so broken up inside

She was like the mother
That i had wanted for so long

As she left and walked away
I knew things would go back just like they were before

This feeling would haunt me everyday
This feeling that would never go away

I loved her
And she would never know

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  • 17 years ago

    by Eternal

    WOW this is outstanding. Look at the very 1st line, it is very creative and provoking a mental feeling. The whole poem is great. KEEP IT UP

  • 17 years ago

    by ŘÅÇĦ♥

    I know what you mean.
    I have had the same thing happened.
    my mom is well... here but not.
    and I want a mom so bad.
    that I look for it in other people
    and get attached
    and than get hurt.
    I wish I had advice.
    But I loved your poem it's awesome!

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Aww.. this is a good poem! The way you write it, just makes you keep on reading.. and I was sitting like: awww =(! and aww! =D hihih.. keep up the good writing!
    xxx

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