Aww.. this is a good poem! The way you write it, just makes you keep on reading.. and I was sitting like: awww =(! and aww! =D hihih.. keep up the good writing!
xxx

I know what you mean.
I have had the same thing happened.
my mom is well... here but not.
and I want a mom so bad.
that I look for it in other people
and get attached
and than get hurt.
I wish I had advice.
But I loved your poem it's awesome!

5/5

WOW this is outstanding. Look at the very 1st line, it is very creative and provoking a mental feeling. The whole poem is great. KEEP IT UP