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by Skulblaka Sverda Jun 21, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
Will these tears ever go Away It seems like they're here to Stay What? You think you can just throw it all Away All the promises that you had Made Do you think they'll just go and Fade It's my soul that they tare and Raid Every single word you Said Just can't get them out of my Head They're embedded in me as if I had Bled I had believed them in the depths of my Heart Didn't you mean them or did you Not All those Broken Promises have torn me Apart I thought you were my friend
by DeathlyAmore
Hello beloved. Alright listen. This poem needs better flow. Although I do love the interpretation of the poem. There is one thing that made the poem better though. Your last line where you stated "I thought you were my friend" Nice line. very tragic. Good job. Voted 4/5