Broken Promises

by Skulblaka Sverda   Jun 21, 2007


Will these tears ever go Away
It seems like they're here to Stay
What? You think you can just throw it all Away

All the promises that you had Made
Do you think they'll just go and Fade
It's my soul that they tare and Raid

Every single word you Said
Just can't get them out of my Head
They're embedded in me as if I had Bled

I had believed them in the depths of my Heart
Didn't you mean them or did you Not
All those Broken Promises have torn me Apart

I thought you were my friend

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  • 17 years ago

    by DeathlyAmore

    Hello beloved.

    Alright listen.

    This poem needs better flow. Although I do love the interpretation of the poem.

    There is one thing that made the poem better though.

    Your last line where you stated "I thought you were my friend"

    Nice line. very tragic.

    Good job.

    Voted 4/5

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