by Fellow Whos Fell Low In Love Jun 21, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
Black is a shade, of the deepest shadow |
by *Charisma*
Loved the line about it staining the cloak of the widow. That was really great. You did a very nice job with this piece. The last line was a tad longer than the rest, but other than that, this poem was brilliant. Great job! |
by Nix
This poem is fantastic. You created amazing atmosphere, short but still very powerful. Every line is written superbly. |
by C Cattaway
Wow.. how you put this across!! This is amazingly written. You are very clever!! Your profile mentions guitar.. do you write songs too? This shows your ability, and I think it's outstanding.. xx |
I really like this poems. I usually don't like stuff like this, but the poems is really amazing. |
Yours was one of my favorites in that collaboration. i sohuld put my yellow poem on here. |