I like it its not anything like my poems. it was really good. 5/5

Yours was one of my favorites in that collaboration. i sohuld put my yellow poem on here.

I really like this poems. I usually don't like stuff like this, but the poems is really amazing.

Wow.. how you put this across!! This is amazingly written. You are very clever!! Your profile mentions guitar.. do you write songs too? This shows your ability, and I think it's outstanding.. xx

This poem is fantastic. You created amazing atmosphere, short but still very powerful. Every line is written superbly.
Well done! 5/5

Loved the line about it staining the cloak of the widow. That was really great. You did a very nice job with this piece. The last line was a tad longer than the rest, but other than that, this poem was brilliant. Great job!
Charisma*