Comments : She's Not Perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by gabriella

    I really liek this poem because it truly displays the way people treat other people. it flows and i lveo the meaning.

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Wow.. o_O I don't know what to say.. this is really good. It's funny that when you start to read, you don't expect to read what comes after a few lines.. Anyway, great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by skynerraw

    Wow, this definetly sounds like me, I'm a girl wrestler, I hang out with guys, I have many guy friends, I'm not afraid to get dirty, and I play video games, and some people in my school are jerks and call me a boy, which I hate, I loved this poem, becuase I think it fits me, 5/5!

  • 17 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    Very sad very good one of my favs

  • 17 years ago

    by jenna grace

    Aaaah. this is amazingly amazing. <3
    5/5 for sure.
    i've been in that place time after time.
    my favorite stanza
    You wish
    And you pray
    Hoping that maybe, just maybe
    She'll change
    it sounds like lyrics of a song that inspire you to be somebody amazing. and it surely does.
    <333333333
    xoxo JENNAY

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    This was also a good poem I liked how you set the whole thing up and how you used the words to paint the picture of contempt it was done well Plot121

  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    AHHH i hate ppl who try to change me
    5.5 youre reallly good with words :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Absolute Broken Perfection

    This is beauty.

  • 16 years ago

    by jenna grace

    I have missed reading your writing <3
    lovely as usual :]]