Hey
i like your poem; it reflects the thoughts of too many people. It is very good that you write about this kind of abuse, it is very important that people don't forget this happens all over. 5/5
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Aww. i loved it. very touching and full of emotion. keep up the absolutely fantastic job!
5/5

best wishes

take care

I loved it. Emotion and feeling was great and you did a great job. Congrats. 5/5

Wow that was really good there was a lot of emotion and that was an overall great read... Check over the 3rd stanza last linee tho ... Regardless 5/5 from me keep it up