by xoxo Jun 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The thunder rolls, |
Applause to love bites. the only problem was that it was short and should have been a nit longer. i like it though. =D |
I liked it, but it just sounds like you were talking and the rhyming seemed a little forced. Maybe if you read over it a little and change it up a bit it will be super wicked... I do like it though. ^.^ good Job. |