Falling In {Love}

by Monica AKA Mika   Jun 21, 2007


What Im about to tell you, is a very hard thing to say,
Because Ive been hurt so many times I just dont want it to happen today

I think Im falling in love with you and I know your wondering why,
Im writing it down right now because my thoughts always seem to pass me bye

When I think of you
I feel a smile come across my lips
And I feel like my heart has floated right down to my fingertips

When Im with you
I feel like Im so safe,
I feel like theres nowhere else I would rather be because there is no better place

When I hear your name
I see your picture in the back of my mind,
All I can do at this point is no that your one of a kind.

When I talk to you
I feel like you could be my best friend,
I can always be myself around because theres no reason to pretend.

When I see you
Its like Im back in elementary school,
Its like with you, my world is always turning no matter how much the world can be cruel.

When you touch me
Everything just seems so right,
Its like Im stuck in the dark but you become my light.

When you look into my eyes
I feel like Im in another place,
Its like I can understand what you want to say just by looking at your face.

When you kiss me
This feeling I could never even dream of,
At this moment I realize that I am falling in love...

...With you...

{*Dedicated To Domonic*}

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  • 17 years ago

    by Javier

    Aww this was a cute poem i really liked it, it reminds me of my last relationship this was a great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Melpomene

    You definitly got my attention with such a touching read, I belive the emotions you portrayed were quite touching delivered straight from your heart and placed into a poem with a gorgeous dedication amongst the love. The structure was hard to read though that it one thing I would change. Try putting this poem into stanzas it would be much neater, much easier to read and wouldn't look as long. A 5/5 none the less from me. Good effort. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    This is my favourite of what I've read of yours so far. The wording is wonderful, it was really a beautiful read.

    You still have a lot of mistakes though: a few spelling errors, and lack of apostrophes yet again. Read over your work before you post it, it'll help you out.

  • 17 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    I enjoyed reading this poem very much. i think it would go better if it was in a astanzas, but overall its very sweet. i rated this one a 5 also

  • 17 years ago

    by JaMeS

    A little difficult to read because of the lack of punctuation but it was well written in a sense of the words and style just add a few commas and that :) overall 4/5

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