I liked it =)))

Wow i love this poem

So good...

A touching read. Quite emotional. You introduce this poem by expressing emotion that youve felt in the past and how you dont want this to really continue. It shows your afraid about the future. Afraid of what it holds. Then you kinda change into this embracing stage. How even though you dont want to get hurt and how you afraid you cant stop it. Again this is osmething that mst people can relate to in their own way. Its good to write poems that readers can relate to. It makes them more intrested in what your saying. Then you really describe the feelings you are acctually feeling of the moment. Its sweet to put it simply. A touching read. One thing that kinda threw me off again was your structure, i mean i would of prefered it you put it into stanza's - it would just look more better presented. I also suggest you use a mroe varied vocabulary, it would make readers feel more intrested and it would be different then other poems. A good read though. Keep writing. x

You definitely write from the heart and I like that.
The passion flows freely from your pen
"I think Im falling in love with you and I know you are wondering why," sets the tone for this romantic love poem
I reminds me of my first love poem

Wow, it was so touching. the flow was great, the structure was good. over all i thought it was beautifully written. great work 5/5

When you kiss me
This feeling I could never even dream of,
At this moment I realize that I am falling in love...

my fave lines ^^

A little difficult to read because of the lack of punctuation but it was well written in a sense of the words and style just add a few commas and that :) overall 4/5

I enjoyed reading this poem very much. i think it would go better if it was in a astanzas, but overall its very sweet. i rated this one a 5 also

This is my favourite of what I've read of yours so far. The wording is wonderful, it was really a beautiful read.

You still have a lot of mistakes though: a few spelling errors, and lack of apostrophes yet again. Read over your work before you post it, it'll help you out.

You definitly got my attention with such a touching read, I belive the emotions you portrayed were quite touching delivered straight from your heart and placed into a poem with a gorgeous dedication amongst the love. The structure was hard to read though that it one thing I would change. Try putting this poem into stanzas it would be much neater, much easier to read and wouldn't look as long. A 5/5 none the less from me. Good effort. ~mel

Aww this was a cute poem i really liked it, it reminds me of my last relationship this was a great poem