Haha. I liked this one. For some reason I thought is was cute and funny. I don't know why. The rhymes made sense, but sometimes it seemed slightly forced.

I agree with kitty =P It had something funny to it =)

Indeed, I think some of the lines need tightening up to augment the flow. Nevertheless, reading this piece quite amuses me, indeed. It rather was a fine piece of work. =] Keep it up. all the best and take care.

Good job you kept it short and simple yet not....which is a good thing loll

laura-

I don't know if it's supposed to be funny- but it made me laugh... lol, great work!

Well id have to agree with them, it did make me laugh, but it was also alitlle...wel...forced, like you tried to hard. just let go man, it will flow as it comes.

I agree with the above comments...it seemed really upbeat and happy. I enjoyed it!

Amusing and cute, but do you really need to express your love for big breasts? Plus, that isn't very true. I've been to England many a time. Haha, ok...nice writing. I give you an A for effort (joking).

5/5

Haha great poem i liked it = ] 5/5

Cute

Hahah funny. ;) good on ya