Alvina Marsha (acrostic)

Very cute! It's sweet to write a poem about someone you care about even if they don't know it. You used just the right words to get the full effect. 5/5 <3

Lovely piece, i loved it.

How you expressed your emotions was beautiful.

Your word choise was really good.

I liked it.

Again your vocabulary is just stunning and beautiful. Poem after poem I try to use new vocab. but for you it just seems to come so natually. I love it!
5/5
kaila

This had amazing vocab! And the flow was just flawless through out the whole thing, It was truly one of my favorites pieces I've read. This girl is really lucky. 5/5

This poem seemed a little strange. The flow was fine, but the choosing of words was rather confusing. 4/5