Again amazing. i like your work. you remind me of myself in so many ways.
&&& this is EXACTLY how i feel about this one boy..
my fave stanza
You were so depressed
And you were in so much pain
But baby, all I ask is just to know
Where you are, and if you're alive today.
[it makes the poem something more..]
well anyways love this verrrry much.
and i wanna be just like everyone else so of course i gotta say "keep up the good work!" lol. =]
<33333333333 with much love JENNAY.

Once again, absolutely amazing! one of the best poems i've read today.
"But baby, all I ask is just to know
Where you are, and if you're alive today."

i really like those two lines.. my fave ones..
they show much pain n longing for tht person..

anwayz take care
.x

Great write keep it up totally ino it

-laura-

Sad. losing a friend is irreplaceable i know the feeling of unknowing. i never got to say goodbye to my bestf riend she just left and doesnt reply to my sms and calls. :(
5.5 an excellent read

This is o sad and meaningful :'( even though the poem is perfectly written with a good flow and rhyme scheme, the last line, out of the poem, triggered it..its so sad...im sorry. 5/5
mezmeryz x