Comments : Don't.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I LOVED THIS POEM! THIS WAS AMAZING! I would pick a favorite part, but they were all really really good. I guess I like your part about illusions being substitutions. I am very impressed with this free verse, because it's hard for me to like free verse, but this was truly amazing!
    Charisma* 5/5