Thats a really sweet poem short but so cute awesome job

alot of love
hailey

Its short but its still worth the read..gr8 job
4/5/
bree

Writing pleasure from you and the reading joy is from my end... be my creme guest cos I like your style of writing...

Nazeer

WonderfuL! excellenT! mE luV diS writinG. keeP uP yR gooDS worK..

goD blesS yoU....

>>>>>luzaN

I don't like it. I know that you can write a lot better. This is too simple and it isn't original. It could be longer and atmosphere could be stronger.