That was so sad... and yet beautiful at the same time. It honestly brought tears to my eyes. You chose your words wisely, and made that a very touching poem.

In a technical sense, the poem flowed and rhymed fairly nicely. In an emotional sense, it was amazing. You expressed everything well.

Very nice.

Ben
what a wonderful tribute to your Aunt & Uncle. It is so hard to lose the one we have spent so much of our life with. You show the heartache of that in this piece. Cancer is a terrible thing and take so manywonderful people. Excellent job On this poem.
Love Cindy

Beautiful dedication

At last you close your eyes peace fills your face.
Fly on toward our rainbow, Jesus has prepared your place

what a lovely stanza...great write my friend...keep writing

all the best and take care

Ben,

Such a sad write. I understand the pain you are feeling in each line you write. It is such a heartbreaking thing to lose someone you love and care about. But as you take these last few months to be with them, then pray that her passing will be peaceful and she doesn't have to endure any pain. And above all, remember, though her passing may bring you sorrow, It will also bring her relief.

May God be with you and your family today and forever

Always,
Jeannie

This was very sad. I wish all the best of hope to the person this piece was inspired by. So young and tragic. The situation reminded me of the poem Terminal my mom and I wrote. Cancer is non discriminating, nobody's safe. Heartwrenching. Nice job on the poem!