by Viridiana Jun 21, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
This is the story of Juan the boy |
Well written! nice work! it is sad! you had great details |
Great poem ,it was very sad , but the truth is it happens everyday in this sorry world ,and people let it go, Great write ,well written and well penned, excellent job on the details of the poem ,great job all around , your friend Tracy d,,,,,,,,,,5/5 |
by Avan Ahmad
Nice poem! finaly you wrote one in here. good job. I feel bad for Juan though. |