This poem was kinda good n the flow kinda bad, i give it a 4/5

To be honest, this is a good piece. I like the wordings and the rhyming lexis but I found forced rhymes also. I think you can make it better. Ok juct correct the bloomer in this line

"Even though it's know of our business" it must be none/know. OK Tc

Fsams

This poem could be better, but it was farly good you made it flow well and it was cute and sad at the same time

I loved the poem.
it was short.. but good.
it rhymed really well.
I'm pretty sure I've commented all of your poems.
lols.
xoxo
--CHelsey