It is a bit confusing so it is a fair poem! i liked the ending though you used pretty strong words could be better though good job!

It's unique. Some of it I felt was alittle choppy or didn't fit but the last part was deffinetly good. I'll give it a four.

It kind of confused me to be honest, but i bet it had good intentions..
lols.
sorry i just didn't understand it.

xoxo
--Chelsey