My Blue Sky

by jenna grace   Jun 21, 2007


Resistable; not
irrisistable yes.
My feelings for you,
one could only guess.
[I lied to you that night,
told you my feelings were gone.
You told me I didnt matter,
my only question: is that how you felt all along?]
Smashed me up;
took all that I had.
Left me alone,
moitionless... sad.
Can you look in my eyes
and truly say
that you wouldnt care if i die?
[My blue sky turns gray.]
your answer: yes.
but i'm only taking a guess.
I dont care anymore.
So today... i made a decision,
Strictly based on fact.
[weight off my shoulder.]
I'm going back, to who i used to be
gonna forget about you.
And start thinking about me.

copyrighted JENNAY 4.30.07
*i dont like the ending much..might come and fix it up later.* any help would be greatly appreciated. thanks =]

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  • 17 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    That was well done, I liked it. I thought the ending was fine too, no need to change it : ) Great job and keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by CHOKE

    My favourite part,
    "I'm going back, to who i used to be
    gonna forget about you.
    And start thinking about me."
    i feel your strength and your confidence in yourself.
    5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hear You Me

    No i really like the ending! its almost inspirational - well done and keep writing xx