No i really like the ending! its almost inspirational - well done and keep writing xx

My favourite part,
"I'm going back, to who i used to be
gonna forget about you.
And start thinking about me."
i feel your strength and your confidence in yourself.
5/5.

That was well done, I liked it. I thought the ending was fine too, no need to change it : ) Great job and keep up the good work.