Hey hun. great poem. im sorry it has to be like this. but its true, if he ent the one, theres someone out there better, just for you!
beautifully sad poetry, keep it up!
nuff luv xx

Another amazing poem!!!
i loved it!
great job!
5/5
--Jess

I don't know if this line is correct.."When you looked you in the eye" If it is I just didn't get it. sorry. but umm over all I really like your poem. I would suggest capitalizing the I(s). 5/5

I can totally relate to this poem....its so sad but so beautiful...keep up the good work

This flow of this poem works well but the idea is a bit cliche.. i think that this poem could be made more enjoyable if you rather than just describing what happened if you focused more on how you feel inside so that the reader can really understand your pain

also i think that you shouldn't have used the word "d * c k" it seems firstly that you used it only becase it rhymed.. also there are many other words that can be used to say the same thing about someone but they have a stronger feeling behind them because they dont sound as trashy try using a theasarus but look up the word jerk or something along those lines

also in this line "But know what am i to do?"
i think you meant to write "But [[now]] what am i to do?"

i'd say this poem is a 4/5 but i will vote a 5 anyway so that you keep your perfect rating

I really like this poem i loovveedd it!! so good one of ur best ones :) keep them coming xx

I dont like this poem
I love it!!! You had a couple errors but who cares!!! YOU GO GIRL.
tell him uh!!! teehee =D

I can relate to this one. I like it.

Another good 1 babes x 5/5 x

Very powerful just tell him how it is sister.... i felt the emotion great job keep'em coming
~hand~

I thought it was good. I liked this one the best...

I thought it was good. I liked this one the best...

Hey
Of course I'd be happy 2 rate ur poems!

I really like this one alot...its tha one that stuck out 2 me the mose...This and "Locked Up" I just wish i could tell this 2 the guy im in love wit...ya rite, he just got such a hold on me....! Lolz Newhoo really excellent job! ~5~
Kaylee

I like this poem i can relate to it...

Wicked poem

this poem made me think of my ex :(
this is well written and a wicked poem. This poem makes the reader feel everything you were saying.

I knew you were that kind of guy
The kind of guy that could lie
When he looked you in the eye
You said I was the only one for you
But now what am I to do?
You took my heart and my soul
And left me cold

I have only dated 3 three guys the the first was for a week, the second was three days, and the first was one week and one day. With all three I knew there trouble but with the last two I should have seen it coming, all three did the exact same thing in the exact same order. I am sorry that it happened to you. If you need to talk I'm here you can pm me or hotmail me.
My hotmail is girlkarateka@hotmail.com

Hey, this is a really good poem, your really talented :)

<3 Miss Murder xx

Again i love the last two lines....but you need to work on making everything flow and try not to force the rhyming...but its a good thought

Oh maan... i know how that feels.. OUCH BURRN!!!

Hey Lexie damn that was a jerk definetly if that ever happened to me I would kill him not literally but yeah..great job you write well