Hi
very nice and beautiful poem 5/5 .
and i'll appreciate your vote and comment for my poems
hani

Very well written. And described.

Great poem.
The rhyming and flow are very good.
I enjoyed reading it.
Nice piece of writing

I don't like it. I just don't love this type of poems. The friendship is not my favorite subject. It isn't deep and I read your better poems. Just 3/5 from me.

I think everybody can relate to this poem because we've all had to experience this, the first day of school you don't want to go and when the time comes to leave you wish you had a few more days. Amazing poem and great flow, the words were so very true - 5/5 GG23

Aww this was so touching and the vocab you used created great imagery .. i can relate as im leaving school now and i feelt he same about all the friends im leaving ehind- as im going to a different college.. very inspiaring.. great write .. 5/5

rates&comments always apprechiated
Kirsty
xx

This was a xool idea for a poem not many people write about this and you made it a very well written poem!

Hey you probably dont remember me but u commented me and so i cam here and commented you! by the way im not a guy idk why it says that

Wow! This is a great graduation poem. Definitely original. 5/5

AMAZING! i love this poem.
you are a great writer.
keep up the good work:]