While you were...

by luv Shelbz luv   Jun 21, 2007


While you were in your warm bed
There's a girl without a roof over her head
While you were eating a home cooked meal
There's a girl thinking she's fat and trying to get the
cuts to heal

While you were shopping for shoes
There's a girl whose running away from the bruises
While you were hanging our with your out with your
friends
There's a girl who's parent's words offends

While you were crushing on your crush
There's a girl who's boyfriend is a rush
While you were leaning in for your first kiss
There's a girl who's boyfriend doesn't give her bliss

While you were at school today
There's a girl who lies in the street and stays
While you were begging you parents for cash
There's a girl who sells herself and gets bashed

While you are complaining about desires and what not
There's a girl out there worse off

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    It was a very sad poem.
    But it was still very good.
    and talent definitely seeps through the poem.
    It was very well structured..
    all around a good poem.
    xoxo
    --CHelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This was a sad poem but well put together and is so true it has a good message in it

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Loved it, my friend said something along the same lines the other day, it really makes you relaise that for you, life isnt that bad compared to others.
    well done
    love Tara-Kay