Loved it, my friend said something along the same lines the other day, it really makes you relaise that for you, life isnt that bad compared to others.
well done
love Tara-Kay

This was a sad poem but well put together and is so true it has a good message in it

It was a very sad poem.
But it was still very good.
and talent definitely seeps through the poem.
It was very well structured..
all around a good poem.
xoxo
--CHelsey