My favourite stanza was,
"Paint me a picture
of the friends we once were ,
before you forgot about me
before you met her."
Sometimes you think things are going so perfect until someone takes it all away :(
Anyway, i loved this poem. It was quite intriguing :)
5/5.

Most people always forget their past if they get their dream. you give a clear image of that. ^^
Nice poem..
Good job, keep writing.. 5/5 ^^

How endearing. This reminded me of the game, "Paint Me A Picture" -- it is so cute! :) Although the poem was rather bittersweet, still I'd give you my props for writing quite a poignant piece. All the best and take care.