The Darkness

by luv Shelbz luv   Jun 21, 2007


The Darkness:
Words full of loss and sorrow
That can't hurt, but not heal
Words that are powerful
And full of despair

Darkness:
A word that is looked at times as nothing, but still
matter enough to be something
It's shallow or full of love
No patterns or light
Like night, mysterious and scary

Darkness:
A word to many as Gothic
But to others it's just a word
That means nothing...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Yet again another very good poem.
    I feel like i keep repeating myself, and i am.
    Your talented.. really you are.
    keep writing.
    xoxo
    --Chelsey

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This could have been better put together, but you are a very goood writer! and it seems you will be a very good writer

  • 17 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    Your flow isn't really uniform. the idea and theme are good but i suggest you try to rhyme a little more because your free verse isn't very good. sorry. PM if you have a question!

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