Your flow isn't really uniform. the idea and theme are good but i suggest you try to rhyme a little more because your free verse isn't very good. sorry. PM if you have a question!

This could have been better put together, but you are a very goood writer! and it seems you will be a very good writer

Yet again another very good poem.
I feel like i keep repeating myself, and i am.
Your talented.. really you are.
keep writing.
xoxo
--Chelsey