Wow.. simply amazing..
"He grabbed me and we kissed
Despite my will, I could not resist.
He stole my heart and left me there
So next time you hear a cry, beware"
that would have to be my fave stanza.. i like this poem alot.. i think its cos i can relate to sum of the feelingz u hv shown in it..
definetly a 5/5
dont stop writing.. ur good! =]]
.x

Oh, wow this was really a great poem with was written greatly. i really liked the style and the word choice.
you are a talented writer, keep it up

Omg totally incredible it is now a fav keep it up

laura
p.s. yay another texan

AHHH! I can't explain how much I loved it, the dissapearing man and the quickness of the whole experiance, freakin' five thumbs up!

Ganna have to find some more people to lend with thumbs, but you'll get them; you deserve 'em.

With love,
~Richi~

Wow. This is an amazing piece. It portrayed your feelings really well. You rhyming was pretty good and consistent the whole way through. I loved the faint resigned feel to the last stanza. Great job. :)

Good poem...it was kind of creepy! the rhyme was really good. i loved the last stanza...it like brought it all together. good work!!

Very good... I simply loved it =).. Had a nice flow to it.. and I love rhyming poems ^_^

Good rhyming it seemed that you didn't force it to either.It left me in an impulse the good kind.=D

I think this sounds perfect the way it is - dont know why you want to change your rhym for slowly - I think it fits what you've got. :)

Mo

I love your poem hope u keep with your talent.

Nice

This was awesome, you have talent. you kept me captured with your words and imagery, a great write.
love Tara-Kay
x

I really liked it. It was different than the other love poems I have read. I gave it a 5/5. It had a nice flow.

What a lovely penned.....so romantic yet heartfelt emotions written, "Love was the only one who stayed. Love wanted to persevere until the last possible moment. Knowledge smiled with great Wisdom and answered, "Because only Time is capable of understanding how great Love is." Beautiful done! you've a gift that no many have, keep them coming, take care, Best wishes from west, Bert.

When I read the title of this poem, I thought to myself, "If this poem is as intruiging as the title, it should be really good." And I was right. Great piece!

Amazing!! have you seen phantom of the opera? this poem reminds me of that play!!

Lol i looked at this poem earlier today nice poem it speaks for itself i can't say much but keep writing. i do though like the way you described things and the way you worded it. those were good.

Sexeh! Awsome, keep up the exalent work!

One word...beautiful, you did a great job simply amazing 10/5

One word...beautiful, you did a great job simply amazing 10/5