That is a very good deep poem. good job and keep it up5/5

I really like this one. Very heartfelt!

Wow.
I really like it. It was so sad && loving at the same time.

"We were great when we were together, and I remember your face when I said together, forever
It lit up like a million Christmas trees but what would happen in the future only god fore-sees."

^ I love those lines.. they sound so beautiful. Wonderful job. Keep writing. 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

I Really Like This Poem! Again, I know how you feel. This is outstanding! 5/5

There are so many references to outside elements. Its like a walking metaphore, its amazing. The strusture is strange, but youre consistant so you must like it. It just doesnt designate where the reader should put emphasist. I would recomentd trying to create more more traditional structure while maintaing your own personal flair.

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[PymgyPuff]

It has a lot of emotion in it, and some contrast feelings. I like it a lot. Keep up the good work.

5/5

Wow this is so sad, but sweet, especially the last line. i enjoyed the detail, and the emotions touched deep. keep it up =]
nuff luv xx 5/5

Wow i liked this one a lot also!

~faith

I thought the poem was really good.
I like how you rhymed, but not too much.
The only suggestion would be to separate
the lines perhaps.
It shows where to end and start.