Same as the other one... good but hard to read 5/5

This poem was amazing
good job!!!!
5/5!
--Jess

I like this one very much!

That was so sad. :[
Yet, wonderful all the same.

"When we went our separate ways I just wanted to cut and cut and cut, but for some reason I resisted cutting a lot and only did it when I was too down to think straight, I will always remember our first date. "

^ Gah.... I can relate to those lines so much, you wouldn't believe. Fabulous job! 5.5

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Well thats pretty good! how sweet u guys kissed under a tree! aww.
=]]brit

You write what's on your mind.. and that's good! =) It turns out to be more a story.. and lots of thought about everything than a poem.. but I kinda like it! =]]
xxx

True emotion honesty can show through your words 5/5

laura

Wow, This is amazing! I know exactly how you feel. 5/5!

Wow, its such a nice theme, I can really understand why you feel the way you do. My only criticism is that it goes so fast because there arent any designated pauses where the reader can reflect before they go on.

{4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

Very true emotions layed out for all to see. Each thought is a pain but also a badge that will lend itself to better days ahead. Keep trucking man and may you find peace. Nice words - don't let your pen sleep for long.

I like that you aren't afraid to let the readers know your grief, but I would make it a bit more flowing. Overall I really liked it. :)