I Love It

by Nathan Turner   Jun 21, 2007


I love it when I see your smile when you see me, I think I love you can't you see. I just hope you feel the same about me.

I wish I had a diary because i'd write about you everyday, I could write forever because you're a topic I have lots to say!

I think your so beautiful I'm just glad that you're going to be mine I hope my heart will not have to pay a fine!

We get on so perfectly well, without seeing you it feels like I'm locked in a cell! I wish I could see you more, don't you ever walk out my life via the door!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Aimee Dawn

    It was a good poem! I liked it =]

    I like how you show your feelings in almost every poem you write and its just not words.

  • 17 years ago

    by Faith Davis

    That is one of the nicest poems that i have ever read!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    We get on so perfectly well, without seeing you it feels like I'm locked in a cell! I wish I could see you more, don't you ever walk out my life.
    That was very powerful and I've felt that way on so many different occasions. Once again, an exellent way to relate it to a LOT of ppl. Great job.
    ~Midnight Sun

    btw-if you comment on other ppl's stuff it helps get you exposure and they usually comment back. Just give it a try. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Dan Bloom

    I like the emotion put into it. Great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    This is good, but it could use a bit of work.

    Take care,
    not-bulletproof.

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