Good poem but some of it was hard to understand but 5/5

Overall it's pretty good,
But one suggestion, break it up into stanzas.
If you need help just look at some of my poems!
3/5
_Amber_

I agree..stanzas would help. But otherwise, good!!

Awh. This is a really sweet poem.
I love it. <3
~Grace

"I wish I had a diary because i'd write about you everyday, I could write forever because you're a topic I have lots to say!"

Your love radiates off of this poem. :] It's just so darn beautiful. I love it. 5.5
Keep writing.

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Good poem, short but good.

Nice write, although when poems for me are always more enjoyable to read when there's some sorda structure to it. Still I give you a 5/5.

marcella

This is a good poem. But like many people said, stanza's will help a lot. 4/5

Well its pretty good but to make it flow a little better you could try takeing the "i's" out, just a little bit of advice!
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brit

It's starts of pretty cute and sweet =] But as you read on, it's pretty hard to understand cause of the way that it's been written. Well, keep it up anyway =)
xxx

Very powerful write inspired by love

5/5
laura

I loved it. it was so full of meaning for me thanks for the great read 5/5

Love U & Take Care

~Love Always Jess~

This is really cute. I agree with Amber. Break it up. But I give you a 4/5

Oh that was soooo sweet. Its unbelievably cute.

Great idea and topic and theme. The reader can sense an emotion. however the structure is difficult to radiate the sensitivity.

{4/5}

[PygmyPuff]

This is good, but it could use a bit of work.

Take care,
not-bulletproof.

I like the emotion put into it. Great poem

We get on so perfectly well, without seeing you it feels like I'm locked in a cell! I wish I could see you more, don't you ever walk out my life.
That was very powerful and I've felt that way on so many different occasions. Once again, an exellent way to relate it to a LOT of ppl. Great job.
~Midnight Sun

btw-if you comment on other ppl's stuff it helps get you exposure and they usually comment back. Just give it a try. :)

That is one of the nicest poems that i have ever read!!!!

It was a good poem! I liked it =]

I like how you show your feelings in almost every poem you write and its just not words.