Shows deep love n also very well written again, i enjoyed reading it 5/5

Loves a b**ch aint it, i know how you feel and i think many people here do too it was portrayed well...:)

This was a great piece shows a lot of passion 5/5

Excellent! Iloved your great word choice and how the words strung each other. great work and very well penned. Bothe lexically and poetically strong 5/5

tc
Fsams

I think this would be really great if maybe you broke down some of lines, and put it into stanzas. It just makes for an easier read. Overall, great poem!

marcella

It was a beautifully penned piece. it was great, the lines were long and than you have a line with 2 words, maybe you should try to put more on it by lessening the other lines. but other than that a true masterpiece. 5/5

It was a good poem but I like the other ones better =) but it's good okay! :)

I think the flow was okay.. Just a suggestion to add more punctuations =)

"Watching you flirt with her makes me jealous"
^^ I feel the same as you.

Keep up the good work!

I like that!!

Omg!
This like explain's me perfectly when I was awaiting Jake0.0
I can't believe how well you captured this. I could never have done it this well.
It was a pleasure to read, even a little Ironic.

I really enjoyed it,
5/5 Elaine.

I agree with cella bella it would be better if you broke it up a bit it just easier to read tht way 4/5

" can't count the number of nights I've thought of you
Staying up all night wondering if you feel the same
I cry thinking of how I don't deserve you
But can't help wanting you anyways
In class instead of at the board I stare at you
Hoping you won't notice
I keep a smile on my face in case you are watching
Watching you flirt with her makes me jealous

^^Doesn't that just make you so mad?!
omg!
I hate it when the person I like is flirting with someone else.

anyways, i Got distracted there, sorry.
It was a good poem. But I have to say, I do agree with "tears i cry" & "cella Bella" breaking it up a bit would make it easier to read.
But non the less its a good poem with wonderful flow.
=]
xoxo
--Chelsey