This is nice i think every one has the dream 4 a place like thiz its really beautiful

Wow, such incredible imagination of what you wish to have. I guess. But I really liked how you described this "place" that's paradise. Very well done. The flow was wonderful. Nothing seemed forced. Well done. God Bless 5/5
<3(^_^)Tayy

Well to be honest it's a great poem ^_^ I like your opening stanza, well done. Flow was smooth and your vocab is good.

Our ideas; our paradise is just a joke
^^This line made the poem extra exciting

5/5! keep up the good work.

Hey i like tihs poems it is nice and yeah i would like to go to a paradise like that cuz it would be peaceful and quite and no drama or any hate nice

I love this!! its so thoughtful and it takes you somewhere you only go in your dreams!! great job!!

Great job on this poem i love the message and if you ever find a place like that can you please send me invitation...great write...=)...5/5

Loved this one. It go on my faves now! You are a rockin poet!

My jaw just freaking dropped....that was so beautiful and amazing

I liked this one, the only part that i didnt like was that everyones the same. but it was still a very good poem 5/5