I dont care what u say this is a very good poem jenna, keep it, as always your poems are excellent and i give this one a 5/5, better not delete it!!!

So heartbreaking. You have that ability to always touch a nerve in your poetry. They are never just poetic words, they always spell out a story and have a just meaning behind each and every write. Lifes occurences and consequences of such are troubling and you have penned it well. Dancing in heaven and finally being the child she missed out on being in this earth filled with wrong. Sad but beautiful.
5/5
Kay

Great poem. very beautiful, yet sad. the descriptions and images you used are always original, effective and touching.

the story in this was very clever and i think i got what you were saying.

i liked the title (guessing it was for the Panic! contestb) great read, well done