You
by Rebecca Phillips Jun 22, 2007
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I want to be happy,I want to be free,for I know I cant go on being the person inside of me,its like i cant escape,the pain that seems to follow,all my dreams have been shattered and drowned in my sorrow,the life that i led took on a heart that bled,yet my heart bled for you and you never even knew,so I'm forced to go on and forced to forget that anything we shared now only holds regret. |
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17 years ago
by Mihaela
I like this poem the most because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.Keep up the good work and take care of you.Best regards,Michelle Xxx 5/5
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17 years ago
This is a realli great poem
i loved it...
onli thing i think u cud do differently is to put it in stanzas... it would be easier to read.
keep up the great work
shell x -
17 years ago
by Jason Rainey
I do like this poem. It shows remorse but anytime you recognize that regret it helps to move on.
Great writing! Keep on! :) -
17 years ago
Dont regret anything because everything that you could have ever done wrong you ended up learning from. one day you are going to look back on whatever it was that happened and realized that it may have made your life harder, but the minute that you got over it, it saved you from hurting even more later on...
anyways this is a really good poem
i can totally relate and i think that everyone else out there can as well
keep it up you have talent
<3jess
