5/5
excellent poem
keep up the good work
have a look at my poems if you
have a spare moment x

I Miss Reading Your Poetry...Your a Truly Gifted Girl And I'm a Big Fan Of Your Work!! 5/5
This Poem Just Says So Much...It Makes Me Look At Death In a Whole New Perspective...I Like Poems With Imagery Like This To Help Make Me Feel As If I'm Living In The Moment....This Was Pure Brilliance
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

This is so amazing, and full of emotion...I couldn't stop reading and then I realized it ended too soon. I love it and I could relate so much to this powerful piece. Enough said. Keep writing!

Damn that was a great poem!
5/5!

How true this is! I can so relate. Sometimes we hurt most those we love most. Sometimes our good intentions come crashing down in disaster. This poem is wonderfully expressed-the wording, the images, the meaning and mostly the pure emotion. It touches both heart and mind. A great piece,

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

Wow
that was an awesome poem!
so emotional
I love it

Welcome to the club