Babe,

Wow. This made me smile. :) There is so much love & care radiating off of this poem. Fantabulous job.

"You never let me fall
when i was feeling down
you seem to keep my smiling
when i wanted to hit the ground."

^ I have someone like this.... I love them to death. It's really nice to have this person isn't it? They're like a big security blanket. :]

"You deserve the best around
and well kevin i guess is good
he better be take care of you
or hes getting a whoopin, understood?"

^ The stanza made me laugh. Woop woop. ;] I adore it. You are such a loving & caring person. Your friend is very lucky to have you in their life & vice versa (sp?).

Excellent as always. :] 5,5
Ilysm.

Stephanie Lynn .+.

Woww that was sooo goodd!! i loved the whole poem from beginning to end. you guys are both lucky that you have each other.. this poem had laughs and serious emotionss... i lovedd it, and i look forward to reading more of your work.. 5/5 from me, and keep up the great work.. thanks a lot for the commentt

Thats so sweat you must have a great relatioship with your sister I'm very glade you have a good relation ship wuth somebody in your family an hope you keep writing

Wow!! that was such a good poem showing emotions and laughs .. made me want to read on .. what a great poem

:) well done .. i love it <3

Xx