by Robert Jun 22, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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by Brittany C
That is so sad yet so sweet and magical at the same time...I loved it..it was easy to read and the floow wasn't that bad...5/5 |
Another greatly written peace, i have to say i am simply speachless on what to say, - raindrops 5/5 |
Wow, this was beautiful and sweet. It was really emotional. The flow was a little awkward though. I think it was because of the long lines. The rhymes seemed a little forced, but I think the love you showed for your family clearly showed through, and that was the point. Greay job! |
by Not
AWESOME WRITE I HONESTLY, AT THE END WHEN I WAS FINISH I WAS BLOWN AWAY, YOUR AMAZINGLY TALENTED AND KEEP WRITING...=]..5/5 |
by Lisa
Wow.. |