by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jun 22, 2007
category :
Life, society /
faith, religion
{Verse 1} |
by Auspicious76
I see that these are song lyrics... but they are hard to follow. Perhaps because I don't know the beat :/ |
Oh, I really like this. It definitely isn't what I was expecting. From the title, you'd never have guessed that this was about faith/religion, which was a refreshing and interesting treat. |
by Debbie
How poignant. Glad to see Ms. Sheena writing about a poem in regards to Faith. It seems to me that the subject, in the midst of turmoil and disdain, in the midst of doubts and uncertainties, feels directionless in life, yet maintains a charming confidence to the Most High. Lovely work. =] 5/5 |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
I like how you took the title and made it your own. This was definitely not what I had in mind, but it's better. Great job on this song. It's fresh. There are simple little errors though, and I'm being nice enough to tel you considering this affects your placing in the contest. Change he to He, and whatever little errors you find. |
I would love to here this with the tune and all great job |